Monday, April 27, 2009

hometown

The home town I am going to writ is famous by: Hollywood,´´ Beverly hills´´, and six flags. Hollywood is characterized by the studios where they film the good movies, also because there all the movies are in premier, and because in the Chinese theater in which the Oscars are given. ´´Beverly hills´´ is the neighborhood of the reach persons; six flags is characterized by being one of the most cool amusement park of the world.
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5 comments:

  1. juanpa mendozaApril 27, 2009 at 3:58 PM

    phillip, your text is intresting, organized,and well doned.I think you need more information.congrats!!!!

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  2. Santiago Bonivento.April 29, 2009 at 5:53 PM

    Philippppp, I have never go to Hollywood but I will like to go and more with this text.
    Good punctuation and capitalization.
    I think you can put a little more things about Six Flags and Beverly Hills.
    It has coherence and is well redacted.
    Congrats!!!!!!

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  3. ...aDrI...May 1, 2009 at 1:54 PM

    Pipe:
    Hi well is very interesting the text but I think yuo need more information ... I think you have to describe more Beverly Hills and Six Flags..... you have a few spelling mistakes .... bye congrats!!!

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  4. chelsea fcMay 2, 2009 at 10:21 AM

    pipe the blog is nice you have a spelling mistake in write that you wriite it writ .
    i dont know holliwood but how you describe it it seem nice.
    in beverly hills and six flags you can write more thing.nice blog

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  5. mapissMay 2, 2009 at 6:01 PM

    Hi Pipe :
    It is a nice description!!
    But it is very short!(you miss important information)
    Bye!!

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