Monday, May 4, 2009

REAL MADRID is a soccer club of España,this club is one of the best soccer teams of the world, it is really good because the european soccer is the best of the world.This club is the one that have won more ¨copas del rey¨ ¨champions league¨ and ¨world championships of clubs¨.This team make a tour passing trought all latinoamerica for making money in benefit of the club.Real madrid some time have the best soccer players.

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7 comments:

  1. sarria 100%May 4, 2009 at 7:43 AM

    i think it could be more subjective,and its very short

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  2. sofi camposMay 4, 2009 at 7:43 AM

    hi pipe i liked your text is organized its a little bit short but it is fine

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  3. juanpa mendozaMay 4, 2009 at 7:49 AM

    Philip,your text is great , it has good punctuation and it has an intresting topic.

    I think that its a litlle bit redoundant.
    congrats!!!!

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  4. Daniela AndradeMay 11, 2009 at 7:28 AM

    Pipe the text is very short i think you could incloude more information But is good

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  5. ...aDrI...May 11, 2009 at 7:35 AM

    Pipe:
    Your text is coherent and well structure, well spelling and well punctuation, in punctuation check capitalization.
    I think you have to describe what are the: "Copas del rey" "Champios League" and "World championships of clubs"
    So, the people like me that doesn´t know about those chsampionships get to know.
    The second image is not so well.
    Is too short.
    Bye.

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  6. jaimeMay 11, 2009 at 7:56 AM

    Philip:your text is very good, complete information, good spelling, good punctuation.
    And that is true because "Los Galacticos" are the best team on the whole world.

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  7. armandMay 18, 2009 at 7:19 AM

    you have a very good punctuation and it see that you like very much soccer and i dont knew about that team

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